Following the evaluation of my first draft for my Smile Campaign, I gathered (from the opinions that I collected using a survey that was completed by my peers who are part of the target audience) that certain aspects of my video needed to be changed. These improvements included, making my video shorter (as my video lasted around 2 and a half minutes) and adding text transitions to make my video more smooth and professional. Both of these things I did, I realised that there were clips that weren't fully necessary to the journey of the video that took up little screen time and therefore weren't really needed, therefore I got rid of them and the video still made sense. Without certain clips in this video, it still showed my characters day, how they wake up not feeling or looking great but push themselves to get up and get ready, with music helping them push themselves. On top of this I added text transitions, as I had only used premier pro once before and that was for my first dra...